In class Mrs Lee gave us a character a setting a problem and we had to write about these and find a solution.We got a woodpecker who was at a ocean and the problem was a shark.We wrote that Mr. Woodpecker would get swooped by a flood to the ocean were his dad got eaten and then he gets eaten and they both peck their way out of the stomach.
Friday, 30 August 2019
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Hey there Petelo! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow! I love the description you used in your writing! It really put an image in my head. The story is a little bit brutal, I mean, pecking your way out of a sharks stomach?!? Man! those birds must have pecked really hard!
I really enjoyed reading this story,I also like the way you put the information in a slide. I also love, and I mean LOVE using google slides. If you look onto my blog, you will see that I have used lots of slides in my blog. Here's a link to my blog. https://ypshanam.blogspot.com
Maybe next time, you could check the spelling in it, you have made a few mishaps. Just be sure to re-read your blog post before publishing it.
Has your teacher done this before (Like, giving you a character and a problem, and you have to make up the solution.)
From Hana.