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Wednesday, 11 December 2019

Wk 9 synthesis work

for our reading work we had to make a controller for the game dart but your fighting underwater against aliens. We had to do this because our story was about a kid who was good are darts and thought of it as just a game.



3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Petelo,
    I like your post about A game controller I like how you made a Nintendo Switch Controller That is very creative, I never thought of added different symbols on. Maybe next time you could go over the writing with Vivid so we can read Because I barely see what it says. But I think it is very cool.

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  2. Kia ora Petelo, I like your controller, It looks very colorful and I like how it has a lot of features to it. next time you could go over your writing because I cant real see what some of the stuff says.
    From
    Greer

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  3. Hi Petelo,

    I really like how you have added in a lot of detail into your controller. I also like that you have described it well so that we know what it is.

    Maybe next time you put the writing on blank part of the paper so that we could read it propely.

    Anyways you did good!

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