Kia Ora Petelo, I like your Poster on the Scariest flying fox. I like how you added a lot of things to make your flying fox more scarier. I never thought of adding Meteors. Maybe next time you could add a Description on what it does and how it works
Hello Petelo, I really like how you had labels that were conected to the picture. I also like how you added a lot of detail into your picture. Maybe next time you could write an explanation of how the Flying fox works. But you did Good! -Talia
This was really creative and I love everything that you have put in it to. I think that it would be scary going on that because I would probably get hurt a lot while going through with it. I love the detail that you put in it and I can see that you have put lot of effort to. Maybe next time you could explain how everything works and what order it would go in, but either than that it's really good!
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Kia Ora Petelo,
ReplyDeleteI like your Poster on the Scariest flying fox. I like how you added a lot of things to make your flying fox more scarier. I never thought of adding Meteors. Maybe next time you could add a Description on what it does and how it works
Hello Petelo, I really like how you had labels that were conected to the picture. I also like how you added a lot of detail into your picture. Maybe next time you could write an explanation of how the Flying fox works. But you did Good!
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Malo e lelei Petelo!
ReplyDeleteThis was really creative and I love everything that you have put in it to. I think that it would be scary going on that because I would probably get hurt a lot while going through with it. I love the detail that you put in it and I can see that you have put lot of effort to. Maybe next time you could explain how everything works and what order it would go in, but either than that it's really good!
~Siale