In class for our reading task we had to make an illustration about a story that we have wrote. I made a picture from my character description about spongebob. it is not that good but it is decent.
I like your drawing about spongebob, I never thought of adding characters that isn't in the cartoon all the time. Maybe next time you could add the story were you got the drawing from because it is a illustration Anyway it is amazing.
I think that your picture looks really awesome. It doesn't need to look good because I can see who is who! This is really awesome to see that you can draw a picture and get something out of it. I think you could work on adding a bit more colour to the drawing because it is a bit blurry and I think that the colour will make it STAND OUT!
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Hey Petelo!
ReplyDeleteThis drawing is real colourful and I love the picture of Spongebob and Gary as well! I think that you did a great job on this piece of art work!
Maybe next time you could talk about the tips that you used to make this piece of art work but either than that this is awesome!
¬Siale
Kia Ora Petelo,
ReplyDeleteI like your drawing about spongebob, I never thought of adding characters that isn't in the cartoon all the time. Maybe next time you could add the story were you got the drawing from because it is a illustration
Anyway it is amazing.
ReplyDeleteAnnyong Petelo,
I think that your picture looks really awesome. It doesn't need to look good because I can see who is who! This is really awesome to see that you can draw a picture and get something out of it. I think you could work on adding a bit more colour to the drawing because it is a bit blurry and I think that the colour will make it STAND OUT!
Thank you for your time,
Tweeny.