What I enjoyed: reading the story
What was hard: nothing
What I need to improve: more information
Wednesday, 23 October 2019
WK 2 information web
In class we did our weekly information web and it was kind of hard because there wasn't that much that I could put down so yeah
What I enjoyed: reading the story
What was hard: nothing
What I need to improve: more information
What I enjoyed: reading the story
What was hard: nothing
What I need to improve: more information
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Kia Ora Petelo,
ReplyDeleteI like your information Web about Willio weaving I think it is really cool I like how you used mindmup instead of using Google Drawing I never thought of doing that. Maybe next time you could add more information in the boxes.
Bonjour Petelo,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your Information Web and I like how you didn't do it on a google drawing because you are able to use different things for your work. I like how you talked about the things you can make and put some steps on how to make the willow easier to use. Something I think you could work on is like you said adding more information but I thought it was really good!
~Siale
hi yes thanks and I will put more in next time.
DeleteAloha Petelo, I like how you gave an explanation of what you can do with your rods and I like how you added detail of what happens if you plant a willow in your garden. Next time you could check your punctuation and see if it makes sense.
ReplyDeleteKind regards,
Greer
Hi Greer and yes I will check to see if I have the punctuation right next time thanks for the tip and th comment.
Delete- Petelo