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Thursday, 26 September 2019

What's at the bottom of the sea

In reading for our infographic we had to do it on what's at the bottom of the sea. We have do to one of these every week or a story map. This was Really fun seeing all the fish but a bit scary.

 What I enjoyed: Looking at all the fish
What was hard: understanding the sentence
What I need to improve: More information
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 September 2019 at 12:45

    Kia Ora Petelo,
    I like your Info graphic about whats at the bottom of the sea I think it is good. I would of never though of showing all the fishes that is under the sea. Maybe next time you could write more about the living things that is under the sea. Kopi Te Mahi(Your Work is Great)

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  2. Anonymous27 September 2019 at 10:17

    Hey Petelo, I really like how you added lots of pictures to show like how something looks like and how it works. I also like how you added a lot of detail for each fact that you wrote. Do you think you could draw your own picture or Diagram?

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  3. Anonymous7 October 2019 at 18:13

    Kia ora i'm Olivia from Yaldhurst Model school
    I really like how you added lots of explanation into your blog which I thought was really cool.
    I learnt what is in the bottom of the ocean because I didn't even know any of those fish existed.
    Next time at the top you could write why you did the blog at all.

    And why did you do that blog?

    Kind regards Olivia🐶

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