In class we had to do our weekly blog post on something. I did this on making a bunker for surviving lava. While doing this I had to think of what to put in their how I would want to set it up and I set it up really weirdly.
Things that were hard: putting thinking of what to put in the house
Things that were easy: Drawing the house
Things that I can improve on: Describing my task
Kia Ora Petelo,
ReplyDeleteI like your poster on a Bunker I think it is really Cool. I like how you showed the lava I never thought of doing that. Maybe next time you could add descriptions to back up the labels. any way I think it is really good.
Kia Ora Petelo! I really liked the bunker that you made to survive from the lava to.
ReplyDeleteI got a good look at it and it actually looks really comfy to me and it's nice to have a unique house or bunker that you live in to! Something I think you could add is maybe some labels because I didn't really know what the things were and I kinda had to guess, and maybe next time when you take the photo you could make it more visible because I couldn't really see it that well. But either than that this is awesome.
Kapai To Mahi! (Your Work Is Great!)
~Siale
Hi petelo
ReplyDeletekia,ora my name is Connor from yaldhurst model school.
I love the way how colourful drawing it looks so cool that drawing is way much better than margarine my dreams ok but yours is way much better than mine. I did something like that but I did it on holes holes as really cool have you ever read it. why did you do this?
from connor bye