In our class we were making Llamas.
this is how you can make one
1 you draw your Llama
2 put some crayon in your backround
3 dye your backround
4 paint your Llama's fur on with BLACK and WHITE
5 go over your Llama's face with pastol.
Here is my Llama.
After we did our Llama our teacher told us that we had to make a random story about them but it had to have Llama's, paragraphs and we had to make it engaging. I really enjoyed my writing because we were able to write about anything but we just had to put those three things in. Something that was really hard for me was putting those three things into my writing and not using the same words to many times. This was super fun I hope we could do something like this again.
Here is my writing
The Crazy Party King Derpy Llama Guy
Hi. I’m Crazy Party King Derpy Llama Guy and this is my story about how I
became the most crazy party king ever.
became the most crazy party king ever.
It all started when I was walking down a road like a normal llama. I saw a sign
saying:
saying:
Tonight is the biggest party ever!
Whoever is the craziest gets bragging rights,
a crown and the name of crazy party king.
Come to 21 Banana Street and be
the craziest person ever!!!’
When I saw this I quickly went home put my fake derpy face on and ran down to
the address.
the address.
After all that running I finally got there and there were a lot of people trying to be
the crazy party king. All of a sudden there was a loud noise. It sounded like a
robot voice.
the crazy party king. All of a sudden there was a loud noise. It sounded like a
robot voice.
“To be the crazy party king you have to first dance and knock everyone off.”
Out of nowhere a big dance platform came up and it had stairs to get on
but no walls to keep you on. Soon half of the group of people got on and
started dancing and pushing people off. Then a big as guy tried to knock me off.
I moved to the side. He came rushing at me and went flying off.
After he went flying off I laughed at him and turned around.
But when I turned around everyone was looking at me and started ramming at me.
Then at that flash of a moment I jumped. higher than I have ever jumped before.
I stayed up there like I was in space. I landed and everyone cheered.
But that all stopped when the voice came again and asked me,
but no walls to keep you on. Soon half of the group of people got on and
started dancing and pushing people off. Then a big as guy tried to knock me off.
I moved to the side. He came rushing at me and went flying off.
After he went flying off I laughed at him and turned around.
But when I turned around everyone was looking at me and started ramming at me.
Then at that flash of a moment I jumped. higher than I have ever jumped before.
I stayed up there like I was in space. I landed and everyone cheered.
But that all stopped when the voice came again and asked me,
“What is your name”
“Derpy Llama Guy” I say.
But after I say that I look at the other side and see who I'm going against.
He’s big, He looks kind of strong, he is my arch nemesis,
my twin brother Derpy Llama Dude. We stare each other down until the
He’s big, He looks kind of strong, he is my arch nemesis,
my twin brother Derpy Llama Dude. We stare each other down until the
The final Match comes and the robot says
“pin the Tail and you shall win”.
Suddenly a whole bunch of pins came down and my brother
tried to put a pin in my tail so I kept on trying to do it to him.
After that we had one of those battles were you put two
swords together and try to push it at the other but with the smallest pins ever.
But I beat my brother but it was too much for me to put a tack into my brother
so I didn’t do it and he got up and tried walking away but the robot didn’t let us.
So I said to him
tried to put a pin in my tail so I kept on trying to do it to him.
After that we had one of those battles were you put two
swords together and try to push it at the other but with the smallest pins ever.
But I beat my brother but it was too much for me to put a tack into my brother
so I didn’t do it and he got up and tried walking away but the robot didn’t let us.
So I said to him
“you do it to me”
but he disagreed and says for me to do it so I do and I become the Crazy
Party King Derpy Llama Guy, get my crown (which is actually a party) and
celebrate. And that's the story about how I become the
Crazy Party King Derpy Llama Guy.
Party King Derpy Llama Guy, get my crown (which is actually a party) and
celebrate. And that's the story about how I become the
Crazy Party King Derpy Llama Guy.
The End
Kia ora my name is Connor I am at Yaldhurst model school. I enjoy the part where you did the drawing.Did you draw it? why did you do it? From Connor
ReplyDeleteHi Connor,
DeleteThanks for the comment and yes I drew this and it just popped in my head to do this.
Would you want to do something like this?