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Friday, 17 August 2018

Tiger and Samuri

WALT create a story around a tiger and a samurai
and here is my story
On a dark cold stormy night I was playing around and just watching ninja in my room. Next out of nowhere were this ad popped up sucking me into my chromebook. Then i’m falling down and down into a lake and I stand up and I end up in this  grey, black boring place . Suddenly i’m a ninja and i’m standing in the lake. A tiger falls right into my hands. I say “ummm hello” “roarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr”. After he leaps out of my hands and walks away. I walk and find some fruit. Suddenly the tiger comes back. Then we look at the fruit and then we see this cave with signs saying “stay out caution” but I go in suddenly I fall into some water and then eyes pop out and it a giant shark leaping at me. I run right at it and it gulps me up and I wake up in my bed dizzy and late for school and I always wondered what happened to the tiger.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Petelo! What an awesome story! You had my attention through the whole piece. I especially love the part where he gets sucked into the Chromebook. It reminds me of the new Jumanji. Where did you find the fruit? And what kind of fruit is it?

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