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Thursday 28 November 2019

The real story of Hansel & Gretel

In our school the seniors (us) got to go on a trip to the national ballet stuff. we watched Hansel and Gretel but only the second act because it was to long. After that we had to make the true story of Hansel & Gretel. This means that we could make our own version of Hansel & Gretel. Here is mine


The true story of Hansel & Gretel
 There was once two little annoying and dumb kids. Their names were Hansel & Gretel. They lived in a poor family so you would think they would be really nice and grateful but NO not these kids. They liked to eat all the food before anyone could cook it or they would go and annoy their parents for no reason. This got them in big trouble because after all the stuff that they did they would get hidings and smacks. 


 But one night they decided to take
 all the food and run into the forest while leaving bread crumbs to find their way back. This wasn't smart though because instead of going home and looking at the reaction of their parents they were found lost with no food. While walking around they stumble across a houses with a witch in it (still in disguise).

 As the two siblings walk in the witch jumps out of nowhere telling them to eat up. They went to a couple of chairs and then some gingerbread man came out. But what the witch planned did not work instead of her gingerbread man feeding them normal food they ate the gingerbread man. As more and more marched out they get devoured every single time. Hansel shouts out to Gretel “This is a feast”. 

 As the witch sighs she runs at Hansel but Hansel grabs a candy cane off the wall and dodges. While the witch gets up Hansel gives her a big spanking SMACK she was out cold. It was so hard that it made an earthquake.

 Hansel and Gretel ran out of there and turtled straight away. While the earthquake stopped the two kids came out of there turtle possien. 

 Even though it took them super long they picked the house up and found their way back home (it took them 1 year). But when they got home they had changed. They were way nicer and more considerate of the food even though they had a whole house made out of it. 

But the witches mum came with her daughter and knocked on the door. Gretel opened the door and ran and got her parents and Hansel. Hansel and Gretel were scared so they walked behind their parents and as they got to the door the witches mum gave them a big smack on their bum. So hard that there was a red mark on it and you could hear it from kilometers away. And of course the little girl witch got a spanking as well and all of them had to say sorry.

 Then after that Hansel and Gretel were rivals with the witch. The witch would send gingerbread men at them everyday and the two kids would keep on killing the witch over and over. And of course they always got a good spanking after that.

 But the mama witch had enough of reviving her daughter so she stopped and she killed Hansel and Gretel so then they could fight somewhere else while the mama witch went and destroyed countless towns and while the parents adopted new kids and became rich and ate ice cream and other treats all day.
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