Christmas acrostic poem

In class we have been learning about all different kinds of writing this year. So every week we have to choose a different piece of writing and write about it. This week I chose a poem. And for my poem I did an acrostic poem about christmas.

Christmas day is a day where we celebrate Jesus’ birthday.

Helping us also on christmas day  Is the extraordinary santa with all of his presents.

Riding on our new bikes and playing all the new toys.

I  personally think that christmas makes everyone spoiled. 

So everyone loves christmas but some people forget that christmas is all because of Jesus and not Santa.

This christmas though I am going to not just think about the presents.

Most of my family think about how it is Jesus’ birthday so I think I will get a good reminder to remember Jesus on this day

As always it still would be fun to still get a present. 

So what I am trying to say in this acrostic poem is to remember that it is Jesus’ birthday and don’t get annoyed if you don’t get any presents.

 

The real story of Hansel & Gretel

In our school the seniors (us) got to go on a trip to the national ballet stuff. we watched Hansel and Gretel but only the second act because it was to long. After that we had to make the true story of Hansel & Gretel. This means that we could make our own version of Hansel & Gretel. Here is mine


The true story of Hansel & Gretel
 There was once two little annoying and dumb kids. Their names were Hansel & Gretel. They lived in a poor family so you would think they would be really nice and grateful but NO not these kids. They liked to eat all the food before anyone could cook it or they would go and annoy their parents for no reason. This got them in big trouble because after all the stuff that they did they would get hidings and smacks. 


 But one night they decided to take
 all the food and run into the forest while leaving bread crumbs to find their way back. This wasn't smart though because instead of going home and looking at the reaction of their parents they were found lost with no food. While walking around they stumble across a houses with a witch in it (still in disguise).

 As the two siblings walk in the witch jumps out of nowhere telling them to eat up. They went to a couple of chairs and then some gingerbread man came out. But what the witch planned did not work instead of her gingerbread man feeding them normal food they ate the gingerbread man. As more and more marched out they get devoured every single time. Hansel shouts out to Gretel “This is a feast”. 

 As the witch sighs she runs at Hansel but Hansel grabs a candy cane off the wall and dodges. While the witch gets up Hansel gives her a big spanking SMACK she was out cold. It was so hard that it made an earthquake.

 Hansel and Gretel ran out of there and turtled straight away. While the earthquake stopped the two kids came out of there turtle possien. 

 Even though it took them super long they picked the house up and found their way back home (it took them 1 year). But when they got home they had changed. They were way nicer and more considerate of the food even though they had a whole house made out of it. 

But the witches mum came with her daughter and knocked on the door. Gretel opened the door and ran and got her parents and Hansel. Hansel and Gretel were scared so they walked behind their parents and as they got to the door the witches mum gave them a big smack on their bum. So hard that there was a red mark on it and you could hear it from kilometers away. And of course the little girl witch got a spanking as well and all of them had to say sorry.

 Then after that Hansel and Gretel were rivals with the witch. The witch would send gingerbread men at them everyday and the two kids would keep on killing the witch over and over. And of course they always got a good spanking after that.

 But the mama witch had enough of reviving her daughter so she stopped and she killed Hansel and Gretel so then they could fight somewhere else while the mama witch went and destroyed countless towns and while the parents adopted new kids and became rich and ate ice cream and other treats all day.
 🍫🍨

Winter the best season ever

One day Mr Norman came into our class for the day and he asked us what our favorite season was and why. He wrote down all the seasons and asked us some questions then he said 

"pick your favorite season and go write why it is your favorite"

and that is how I ended up with this piece of writing. It was kind of hard but I did finish it.

Her is my writing 

Do you like winter? Is it your favorite season? If it isn’t what season do you
like? Anyways if you like winter then I agree with you and you should also
read this. As it is a story that you will like and should read. 

Winter has a lot of snow when it is a snowy day. It is amazing seeing all of it
and playing with it. When it snows you can go make an army of snowmen and
hide behind them while having snowball fights. Or if you don’t like the snow
you don’t have to play with it. Instead, you can go ice skating on frozen
lakes with your friends and family.

When it is winter you can also just stay inside and relax. You can make a
hot chocolate and sit next to a fire if you have one. Or even if it is a super hot
day winter still gives the day a nice breeze. It can make you go from stinking
hot to nice and cool.

Winter also has really fun sports that you can play, like soccer, rugby,
hockey and more. I like these because you can play all of them and not
just one at a time and then wait for next year - it’s kind of like multi tasking!
An example of this is that you can play rugby and have so much fun. 

In winter it is really cold, and since it is really cold it can get me sick and
I won’t have to go to school. One example of this is I could be taking my
dog on a walk and I could get a cold, and so I then won’t have to go to
school and can stay home in bed all day.

This concludes that winter is the best and why I love it. 

Llama Drama

In our class we were making Llamas.

this is how you can make one 

1  you draw your Llama

2 put some crayon in your backround 

3 dye your backround

4 paint your Llama's fur on with BLACK and WHITE

5 go over your Llama's face with pastol.

Here is my Llama.

After we did our Llama our teacher told us that we had to make a random story about them but it had to have Llama's, paragraphs and we had to make it engaging. I really enjoyed my writing because we were able to write about anything but we just had to put those three things in. Something that was really hard for me was putting those three things into my writing and not using the same words to many times. This was super fun I hope we could do something like this again.

Here is my writing 

The Crazy Party King Derpy Llama Guy 

Hi. I’m Crazy Party King Derpy Llama Guy and this is my story about how I
became the most crazy party king ever.

It all started when I was walking down a road like a normal llama. I saw a sign
saying:

Tonight is the biggest party ever!

Whoever is the craziest gets bragging rights,

a crown and the name of crazy party king.

Come to 21 Banana Street and be

the craziest person ever!!!’

When I saw this I quickly went home put my fake derpy face on and ran down to
the address. 

After all that running I finally got there and there were a lot of people trying to be
  the crazy party king. All of a sudden there was a loud noise. It sounded like a
robot voice. 

“To be the crazy party king you have to first dance and knock everyone off.”

 Out of nowhere a big dance platform came up and it had stairs to get on
but no walls to keep you on. Soon half of the group of people got on and
started dancing and pushing people off. Then a big as guy tried to knock me off.
I moved to the side. He came rushing at me and went flying off.
After he went flying off I laughed at him and turned around.
But when I turned around everyone was looking at me and started ramming at me.
Then at that flash of a moment I jumped. higher than I have ever jumped before.
I stayed up there like I was in space. I landed and everyone cheered.
But that all stopped when the voice came again and asked me, 

“What is your name” 

 “Derpy Llama Guy” I say.

 But after I say that I look at the other side and see who I'm going against.
He’s big, He looks kind of strong, he is my arch nemesis,
my twin brother Derpy Llama Dude. We stare each other down until the

The final Match comes and the robot says 

“pin the Tail and you shall win”. 

Suddenly a whole bunch of pins came down and my brother
tried to put a pin in my tail so I kept on trying to do it to him.
After that we had one of those battles were you put two
swords together and try to push it at the other but with the smallest pins ever.
But I beat my brother but it was too much for me to put a tack into my brother
so I didn’t do it and he got up and tried walking away but the robot didn’t let us.
So I said to him 

“you do it to me”

 but he disagreed and says for me to do it so I do and I become the Crazy
Party King Derpy Llama Guy, get my crown (which is actually a party) and
celebrate. And that's the story about how I become the
Crazy Party King Derpy Llama Guy.

The End

The Best Animal in the World and Personal Hygiene Writing

In class our student teacher was teaching us about the SEER (starting statement , Explanation, Examples and Relevance) structure.  When we did this we got to choose two different topics I picked personal hygiene and the best animal in the world. Here is my awesome and not boring work.

I think the best animal in the world is a cheetah. This is because of how fast and their skin. For example if they’re getting hunted  they can run away and climb a tree or if their prey is too fast they can run after them. Another example is that when it hunts Zebra, glazelle, impala and other things, it camouflages with the long brown grass and slowly walks up to the prey like an assassin and then it’ll pounce and get some food. these are just some reasons why cheetahs are the fastest and best animal in the world.

Cheetahs are also the best animal in the world. This is because they  are light and have amazing eyesight. For example, cheetahs can see up to 5 km’s away so they can see their prey and hunt it. Another example is that since they are so light they run faster at their prey and run away faster from their predators. These are some more facts about why cheetahs are the best in the world. 

Personal hygiene is really good for you. This is because it helps us be healthier, not to spread germs and to be cleaner. For example if you keep hygiene you won’t get other people sick with your hands or with your mouth. Another example is that if you keep up with you hygiene you will not be smelly or your teeth won’t go rotten.  For example if you do this then you will have nice white teeth and not be really unhealthy. This is why we need to be healthy and keep our hygiene.

These are just some reasons why I think cheetahs are the best and fastest animal on the world and also why personal hygiene is really good to keep hope you enjoyed it.

Bye

There, Their, They're

WALT identify and use homonyms correctly.

Before we did this we had to do a word study sheet on the three there's. then make this  poster explaining how you use them and what do they mean. 

Quiz Question

1. What do the three there's mean

2. What is the example for the third there  
3. What does They're stand for

The crazy Green pill

The green pill

 I opened my eyes and there was this fury, two headed creature looking at me and then it say “are you alright “ And then I say “yes I am” and then it says “I need your help with something” and so then I get up and I feel my head ut there was no lump but at the same time I was like is this a dream and the the creature takes me to it’s home and I help him get this big box out of the way and then he says “thank you so much for your reward I will give you a choice of all of these pills but don’t know what they do all I know is that they were of in 24 hours” and then there was a yellow, green, grey, black, pink, and blue I choose the green one and then I run off and l look at the pill just like I wonder what this is and then I find a water source and i’m thinking do I eat it now or later I should probably take it later and so I went to sleep and woke up in the morning and the little creature says “can you give me the pill back” and then I thought about and just said NEVER! And started to run but he was always in front of me and then I say why “do you want it” cause they say if you eat all of the pills at one time you get the superpowers for the rest of your life and then I had no choice I just chewed it up adn and ran away but he was to fast and then I’m like I wish I was a cheetah and then I turned into a cheetah now I was way faster than him and his teleportation and then I just kept on saying different animals and kept on changing and then I thought I could be any animal and this thing really short so then it came to me king kong I quickly yelled it out and became a 1million foot monster and then the thing saw me and started laughing but then stopped and glared me down and he started to grow bigger and bigger and bigger until he was as big as me and then I wondered what would be bigger than him and would be so big that he would not be able to grow into godzilla so then I jump on him and he was dead then I quickly start to look around for my family and I finally I find them and I pick them up and start finding my way home. 

 The end…

Adam and the Illuminati

WALT write a descriptive story from a picture.

We had to Brainstorm about before the picture that, we looked at and after the picture.

Adam and the Illuminati

I was looking around the house. Then I saw it the secret triangle shaped key with a hacker mask on it.This could only mean one thing the illuminati was working with hackers. Next it says though me at the door but Adam wanted to investigate so he down and started to think.Then he sat there and sat there more until it came to him his dad (Klaasen) is a hacker. He used to hack into bank accounts and he always wore and Illuminati mask we still have it in our basement anyway I stand up through the key at the door get my double revolvers and Samurai sword and then open the door and jump down. Then creepy music starts to play and eyes start to appear and says i’m jack the killer and i’m your uncle ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha then I just shoot him and and say well that was dumb then it was the final boss the illuminati but I go up to him and yell self destruct and then we both die but god gave me another chance stole all the money killed my father and became a millionaire.

THE END...

Tiger and Samuri

WALT create a story around a tiger and a samurai
and here is my story

On a dark cold stormy night I was playing around and just watching ninja in my room. Next out of nowhere were this ad popped up sucking me into my chromebook. Then i’m falling down and down into a lake and I stand up and I end up in this  grey, black boring place . Suddenly i’m a ninja and i’m standing in the lake. A tiger falls right into my hands. I say “ummm hello” “roarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr”. After he leaps out of my hands and walks away. I walk and find some fruit. Suddenly the tiger comes back. Then we look at the fruit and then we see this cave with signs saying “stay out caution” but I go in suddenly I fall into some water and then eyes pop out and it a giant shark leaping at me. I run right at it and it gulps me up and I wake up in my bed dizzy and late for school and I always wondered what happened to the tiger.

Information report about school

We we were writing information reports about our school. We had to brainstorm about the school then had to make a information report in our book and then copy that onto our device.

Our school

Our school is St Bernadette's and in Hornby of New Zealand

At St Bernadette’s we are a Catholic school and we are named
after a saint. Our church is also getting rebuilt so now we use
our hall as a church but even that is way to small.

In our school we have 132 children and 15 teachers. My
teacher is Miss Holland and my favorite teacher is the
principal Mr Norman because he is nice and fun.

In our school we have thing called the C.E.R.R values.  It
stands for Compassion, E stands for Excellence, R stand
for Responsibility and the last R stands for Respect and on
every Monday we have Prayer Assembly which is where we
talk and learn more about the C.E.R.R values. We got these
C.E.R.R values just last year.

I like this school because it’s cool and Catholic and
\ cause you can make friends easily and have fun with others.

My awsome / best thing that I did in my holiday

WALT recount a time from my holiday

In my holidays I was staying home with my uncles just like any other day but this was, not like any other day because we the dog out for a walk and when we were walking the dog kept on peeing and pooping, until my uncle closed his a and started to walk and the dog pooped, on him and was

laughing and then he says “ why do I feel heaver did the dog poo on me “,

And he opens his eyes and shock on his face it was like he was a frozen statue so we took him back and when we got there he was out of shock, mode and when we got there I

was was cracking up it was so funny and then he puts his feet in some water but it didn’t, come off and then he still put his feet up and then the dog, liks his feet and he tasted it and it was awful and then he got, a glass cup of water and then the dog comes and liks my, face and then I have

so much poop on my face but I don’t even notice until my uncle says hey why don’t, you go wash your face and then I look in the mirror and I scream, so loud that it breaks his glass cup but I still get it off me and the, I say “ were even no more pranks”,

and then we both, pulled out guns.and shot each other until we had no more, bullet but the last one went right into his mouth.