Dung beetles (post 1)

In class we have been learning about dung beetles. Dung beetles are the whole reason that the earth is not covered in poo because they eat it.

In our task though we have to make a slide or a doc and we have to do 3 or more posts about our tasks. this one is my first one and it is about how they get there dung. (there are 3 ways they get there dung but I have done just one).

Narrative writing

Is class we have just started learning again about Narrative writing. We had to write a story about anything with some rules. Then we had to check with each other if it was good and give feedback.

The rules:
Language features (idiom metaphor etc)
Use paragraphs 
Your character has to speak 

Dingo and the explosion 

 As I the almighty Dingo the Dino looked up from my food a face of fear popped onto my face as I screamed out
 “Ahh”.
 she screamed as she saw the meteor flew right at her. Jimi the Jinzhousaurus was running up to everyone saying 
 “the end is here”. 

 I ran around looking for a shelter that would protect me from the gigantic burning rock. Then I looked at a cave and thought to myself that if I go in deep enough I will and barricade the entrance I might just stand a chance. When I started to barricade it slowly got darker and darker until there was just a little hole With a missing rock. 

 As I looked out I saw that the meteor was about to hit. So I plugged the missing hole and ran down as far as I could. While I was about half way down I heard a Thundering BOOM and CRASH.

 I went up the cave slowly and took the little rock out and looked out there. No one was there. I went and unplugged the entrance I looked around. It was like a wasteland out here. I sobbed and screamed out 
 “Why did this happen”. 
 I walked around looking for anyone. I finally found some water and drank some. I was so sad that I just feel into the water not caring at all. But when I got up I saw something in the distance. I ran and to my surprise it was a human and he was all alone. So I go up to him, he smiles at me and say 
 “Hi”
 “Hi” 
I say back The human freaks me out he then asks for my name, I say 
“Dingo the dino”. 
As we talk, we get to know each other and I found out that his name was jackson. So we go and live together until we are really old and we die. 

(my feedback)

 I like how you included the meteor I love how you made the story really funny Next time you could add the human talking

Week 5 synthesis work

IN class we had to do our weekly synthesis work. This basically is our blog post for reading. In our synthesis task we hadx to make something that would clear out mountains for airstrips and a easier way to get building supplies up mountains. We had to do this task because we read an article about Sir Edmund Hillary and what he did. One of the things that he did was help make schools and hospitals and all of that helpful stuff. But they had to wait ages for the supplies because people were going by foot. so this machine makes it easier.

Weekly synthesis work

In class we had to do our weekly blog post on something. I did this on making a bunker for surviving lava. While doing this I had to think of what to put in their how I would want to set it up and I set it up really weirdly.

Things that were hard: putting thinking of what to put in the  house
Things that were easy: Drawing the house
Things that I can improve on: Describing my task

Spongebob descriptive writing

In class we first started our descriptive writing with being in buddies and write about anyone that we wanted to. Me and my buddie choose spongebob. In this story we had to add types of speech like similes or personification and more.






 He is as yellow as the sun. It's The Yellow Sponge That can squeeze all the way down and also has mini pits in him. He is a Magical Sponge that can’t get hurt. His Signature is the unbelievable SPONGEBOB DUN DUN DUHHHH!!!!! 

Spongebob is a crack up sponge Just like a comedian. His finest friends are patrick and squidward but squidward is always going BLAH BLAH BLAH. He works at the Krusty krab in Bikini Bottom. And of course no one can forget the almighty gary the snail. He is also outstanding at making Krabby patties.

 He is Dazzling yellow. Where's a Magnificent suit and a Foolproof tie. Also always has his Unique Spatula, and he also wears black Glossy shoes that are magical. He is also very short and square Shaped. He wears the same clothes every single day.

 SpongeBob has a little pickle with Plankton Because he annoys Spongebob for the Unknown Formula. He also sometimes has a predicament with the flying dutchman who is a ghost pirate and also king neptune who is the emperor of the ocean and shoots lasers with his trident that go BANG!!!. 

In conclusion spongebob is an insane magical sponge who lives in a pineapple under the sea. He is also a horrible civilon in Bikini Bottom but makes the Supreme Krabby Patties to make up for it. He is a Sponge that squeezes and splashes everywhere.

Flower competition

In our class we were making flowers for a flower competition. This is for like the environment. In class for our nature thing we are doing printmaking. Also It was really cool seeing how everyone else's went. 

Things that were hard: Keeping the layers on 
Things that were easy: the blog posting
Things I need to improve on: not pushing to hard with a roller 

Descriptive writing

In class we have been going over descriptive writing  and so we had to describe these things in this slide show but I haven't finished it yet so there will be some slides blank.